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by kmatrix

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Good first shot at writing, keep it up, hone your skills

largejames22largejames22about 3 years ago
Things to work on

Get an editor. Things need working on but not bad

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Normally trans/gay isnt my type of story but this was a pleasant surprise

justwarped2018justwarped2018about 3 years ago

nice start like to read more

deanahiideanahiiabout 3 years ago
hot

i just loved the story and it proceeded so nice got me good and hard.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

GREAT MORE

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I just started writing and really enjoy it so far. I am a straight male but I do enjoy reading and writing bi-sex, transgender, and horror stories. If you have an idea for a story you would like to have wrote please contact me. I'm trying to keep my stories short until I gain ...