All Comments on 'Checking in with Daddy'

by libraryguy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Its just a crappy dream of the girl

This isn't even a really taboo but a crappy dream of the girl.

aclassyladyaclassyladyalmost 9 years ago
needs to be longer

I liked your story but it needs to be longer. The characters don't have to much background so all you really get is a good start of a potentially good story.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 6 years ago
Fun

Clerk's suspect this all the time

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