All Comments on 'Checking Out The Beemer Ch. 02'

You write excitingly in good English. I really hope to see more of yout work.

the three of them should continue to fuck and sally and sissy should have some lesbian fun while beemer watches and maybe beemer and sally could tell sissy that it was all a put on to get her involved with them both

when are you going to finish the story you just stop and leave us hanging finish it now or stop writing all stories should be finished properly before starting a new one

finish it or delete it but never leave the readers hanging. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A WHOLE LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS FINISH WHAT YOU START OR DON'T START AT ALL NOW EITHER WRITE OR DELETE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

of a friend or family member. TK U MLJ LV NV

a great follow up to the first installment!

i love how the sister is able to control her desires and keep things mainly clinical.

those screaming for you to finish the story clearly missed the whole point.

unlike the last idiot all readers here (except him) know this is far from over and we want you to continue. if you feel you are not up to it find a ghost writer to finish it for you. which ever you choose do it soon half a story is worse than no story at all and this is much less than half.