All Comments on 'Cheer'

needs more

Just too far fetched to be great. 18 year old nerd screws 2 cheerleaders to multiple orgasms before he cums once? Don't care if that condom was made by Goodyear, he probably would have cum before he even penetrated onw of them.

A decent retelling of the comic, though not sure why the ending was clipped off?

Awesome story that needs at least a second chapter to close it out. There's definitely more to tell: Do Michael and Sarah stay together? Does Megan stay as a third, or mauve hook up with John? How does John react when he hearts what he missed?

Even lacking a proper conclusion, this one gets 5* from me.