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All Comments on 'Cheerleader Chronicle Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
editor or proof read

Either get an editor or do a better job of proof reading. The use of "come" when it should be "cum" is noticed and only found by proof reading. This story contains this error as do many of recent ventage, wished authors would proof read before uploading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Listen to your own advice, Mr Critic!

You meant vintage, not ventage, Mr. Critic! I absolutely loved this story. Can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great Story

More please!!! It was HOT!!

marcus48marcus48about 11 years ago
interesting

straight to chapter 2

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