All Comments on 'Cheerleader Chronicle Ch. 03'

by tk5555

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice set-up

For the most part I am enjoying your story. However you need to proofread better as it is riddled with typos such as misspellings and missing words. Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

more please

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