All Comments on 'Cheerleader Sister'

Fuck this' that's just stuid

granted it could have been better but maybe you could do a couple more chapters and Kaylee starts to develop feelings for her, oh btw Anonymous what does "stuid" mean exactly? :-P

A slow domination is often quite erotic and I think you have serious potential. The writing was a bit rough around the edges, but still thoroughly enjoyable. Unfortunately, it never got to the point that I would call it a hot read. Seemed to me that you spent a lot of time setting it up only to quit when the fun was starting.

Another chapter is definitely called for. At least one more, but I could definitely see this taking several installments in order to completely detail the sister's fall.

No way the mother could be that badly whipped.

I enjoyed this story. You did a great job of describing the action and emotions leading up to the older sister's enslavement. As a fan of sweaty female feet and asses, this was a great read and I sincerely hope you continue with these characters. I honestly don't understand why anyone would condemn this story. I suspect the pieces of human trash doing so are one and the same person and are unable to write beyond a first grad level themselves. Keep up the great work.

Best to have becca and bailey as submissive sluts to.the cheerleading squad and interracial fuck toys.

Excellent story, just needs a part 2. Just a very tense read, which I enjoyed.

Waiting for part 2 !

Kaylee needs to continue her complete domination of her sister and mother. Her mother in particular needs to do everything in her power to satisfy Kaylee's sadistic needs. Mommy realizes that her true purpose in life is to service Kaylee. Kaylee is in charge and always knows what is best.

I loved this story and continue to reread it, probably because it's as different, subtle and imaginative as anything I've read. If you just want sex, it isn't for you. But the way the relationships play out, the submisson at the end, the little things foreshadowed and alluded to--it made this sub's heart all aflutter. Would love to read more about how the mother and Becca came to be as they are. Great stuff. I hope you continue with this storyline but even if you don't, it's a great piece all by itself.

I've never commented on any story I've read on this site before this one. Honestly, this is one of the hottest stories I've ever read on here. I was completely aroused and turned on like never before. The foot fetish, face sitting, hair pulling, younger dominating older, cheerleader, lesbian and incest angles in this were spot on. I am forever a fan and look forward to reading any more chapters or stories from you in the future. Keep doing you.

This was an enjoyable story to read however, it does need many more chapters to complete the total picture of Kaylee dominating her sister and mother.

Really, it ended way too fast.

All these people clamoring for another chapter or an addition are missing the beauty of a story that doesn't go into great explanation of every detail. The entire focus of the story was Bailey's surrender and that was achieved in a wonderfully (for lack of a better word) complete fashion. All of the side stories that were brought up can be imagined and flushed out by us readers. ScioNescio has created a wonderful world that we can expand however we want. Any additions would place unwelcome limits on it.

I like the story but kaylee is just a total bitch. Honestly wouldve been so much better with an older woman being the dom. good story but the bitch is annoying as fuck

This was so hot more please

It don't follow logical sense that a mom our submit to her youngest and let her abuse and hurt others.

You have been an inspiration to me as a writer. For subject material I'm so much in line with this. Your writing is a technical marvel: I truly believe that I'm seeing the protagonist's life experience. Great way of using her character to establish plot, while still keeping it really really hot!

So many original things here