All Comments on 'Chelsea's 18th Birthday Ch. 02'

SWEET SEX makes a great birthday present -- or for Halloween, Christmas, Eve of Saint Agnes, Arbor Day and whenever -- especially as it slides into true and generous love. Thank you!

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!

OMG!!!!

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!

Can I say anymore?

This is so romantic and sooo sweet.

I LOVED IT!

I love both chapters!

Keep writing more like this!

The beginning had me in tears xD

WHICH IS GOOD!!!!

You're amazing:)

I love the way you wrote the second chapter between Brent and Chelsea. I love how you showed feelings on both sides of the equation between them. It was nice to see how Brent had feelings for Chelsea that he had never shown to any other woman before. I can hardly wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

This Is a true story of love and exploration. It reminds me of my first love so many years ago. It seems so real and so right. Absoulutly Superb!!!!!

No male writer could convey Chelsea's desire and insecurity in such a beautiful and realistic way. Also, You have an intuitive view on how a man loves to see his girl undressing and being sexy. Shyness is cute!!!!

Always your biggest fan

absolutely amazing i find myself wrapped up in each chapter and i can't get enough. the flood of emotions i get while reading is like i'm in the story... and through their love it's showed me what true love really is again and i can't wait to find it. :) thank you. hope there's many more to come.

I am a shy person, but her extreme shyness is getting annoying. She turns red while thanking him for a meal? Anytime they have a conversation she’s embarrassed.