All Comments on 'Chelsea's Downfall Ch. 03'

by TheFallen27

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MaynessMaynessalmost 11 years ago

What a swine, cad and rogue! Glad you are continuing this. Thanks.

spearishspearishalmost 11 years ago
Noooooo don't let the swine get her !

Can't her master save her or at least let the rogue be a nice rogue ....softy I am .lol

claireacquiredclaireacquiredalmost 11 years ago

Can't wait to see who you will find to save our young maid. The Lord of the Manor? A dashing young guest? Maybe Chelsea herself will find a way out...or maybe she won't. Either way, can't wait to read more.

FA_JFFA_JFalmost 11 years ago

Our sweet Chelsea needs to start carrying a carving knife in her skirt pockets. Maybe our villain can trip and fall on that. Or a little extra something in his meal to keep him busy in the privy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
noncon

I hope I'm not alone in wanting Henry to get her. After all, it is in the non-con section. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

ncrfreakncrfreakalmost 11 years ago

Agree with anonymous comment. Non-con is non-con. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Agree with other comment, keep him busy in the privy

Henry sounds like the sort of person who was the bully at school and tormented small animals for fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

PLEASE write more!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More Please!

One of my favorite stories on this site. Hope to read more soon (:

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
MOAR!

Love the story so far. Hope to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
amazing build up!

Don't tease us! please write more!!!! :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I love your story, thus far. But please be mindful about interchanging names of the character. You mentioned James in this chapter, when it should be Henry...

Hope you will update it soon. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

You should continue this story!! It's very good.

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