by BlewWater69
ive been waiting for this last installment for weeks and it was every bit as good as i had hope! reminds me of my prom night...
thanks again,
james
I love your stories! You are an excellent writer and love getting myself off to your nerd\slut chapters:)
28\F 5'2 110 New England
No offense, but to be honest I felt this part was quite a bit weaker than the earlier ones. Biggest problem for me was the build-up - the chronicing of events with the prom seemed rushed and the language was to distanced to work as a build-up. Not even the fight scene - though a good idea - worked that well.
The actual sex was much better, but even there your writing at times seemed to lack focus and descriptions were to cliché or a bit lackluster.
That said, I did enjoy all the first parts of the story and would like to read a conclusion
what about stephanie? why didn't she hold up he end of the bargain?
wow i love your story but you cant tell me thats it!!! omg it was so hot but i need to know what happend with steffie and then the next day come on you know this can keep going!!! i cant wait until you write a ch. 8 9 10 and however many more you want to write its great
Hhhmmm...Kendall and Kyle really could have been better prepared for their first-time anal experience...more reading up on getting Kendall's poop chute relaxed & opened up a bit. But, they are young, and can experience it more, now that the 1st time is complete...
Steffie and Cole...next chapter ("maybe?")...plus, Michelle & Mark may surprise us, too
On to last chapter...5 Stars for this one!