All Comments on 'Chemistry Between Nerds and Sluts Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Its cuming to a conclusion

ive been waiting for this last installment for weeks and it was every bit as good as i had hope! reminds me of my prom night...

thanks again,

james

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
More!

More Please.........don't let it end!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice!

I love your stories! You are an excellent writer and love getting myself off to your nerd\slut chapters:)

28\F 5'2 110 New England

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Weaker then 1-6

No offense, but to be honest I felt this part was quite a bit weaker than the earlier ones. Biggest problem for me was the build-up - the chronicing of events with the prom seemed rushed and the language was to distanced to work as a build-up. Not even the fight scene - though a good idea - worked that well.

The actual sex was much better, but even there your writing at times seemed to lack focus and descriptions were to cliché or a bit lackluster.

That said, I did enjoy all the first parts of the story and would like to read a conclusion

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
no anal for steph?

what about stephanie? why didn't she hold up he end of the bargain?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
please dont let it end like that!!!!!

wow i love your story but you cant tell me thats it!!! omg it was so hot but i need to know what happend with steffie and then the next day come on you know this can keep going!!! i cant wait until you write a ch. 8 9 10 and however many more you want to write its great

TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOGover 1 year ago

Hhhmmm...Kendall and Kyle really could have been better prepared for their first-time anal experience...more reading up on getting Kendall's poop chute relaxed & opened up a bit. But, they are young, and can experience it more, now that the 1st time is complete...

Steffie and Cole...next chapter ("maybe?")...plus, Michelle & Mark may surprise us, too

On to last chapter...5 Stars for this one!

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