All Comments on 'Chemistry: Just Add Alcohol'

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wifefuckedwifefuckedabout 19 years ago
Alcohol & Infidelity - a perfect match!

A very sexy story about two long time flirting people who had the opportunity to get drunk and show each other how hot they were for the other without their significant others around! HOT HOT HOT!!!

don87654don87654about 19 years ago
Could've been better, more erotic

Somehow I lost the eroticism in this fantasy story.

DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
Have mercy!

That was sooooo sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
too short

This is just a short little story of which one could only wish was longer. While the writing here is not on par with the author's work in later years, it is still remarkably well-written. Compared to the author's other stories, this one is just a little "teaser". For an example of the author's later (and in this reviewer's opinion) better written stories, Kissing Cousins is an outstanding example. For those who like a true epic, the author's amazing Charmaine/Danny saga is an in-depth story and an incredible reading experience. It is actually a series of stories. This reviewer (NOT necessarily the author) suggests that this saga be read in the following order: 1) Leslie's Demise 2) Loyalty? Never Heard of It 3) What Time Do you Get Off? 4) Stacy the Temptress 5) Charmaine's Infidelity 6) Nick, or Dean? 7) Fiery Redhead 8) About Lust & Vengeance 9) Persistency Pays 10) My Girlfriend's Best Friend 11) Outside the Office 12) Stacy the Lover 13) Stacy the Nympho 14) Infidelity Revisited ch. 1-8 15) My Girlfriend's Best Friend 16) Infidelity Revisited ch. 9-13 17) Stacy the Mistress 18) Infidelity Revisited ch. 14 19) Stacy the Sinner 20) Infidelity Revisited ch. 15-18 21) A Vacation to Remember ch. 3 22) Infidelity Revisited ch. 19 23) A Vacation to Remember ch. 1-2 24) Lucky with the Landlords 25) Anahita 26) Reunion_Charmaine & Danny. Although this story was written in the early years of author's writing, (it has improved markedly since then), the Charmaine/Danny saga is a truly great story, and yet just a part of what is an amazing output by an excellent author.

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I am Jordan Xavier, known as X-Factor on Literotica since 2001. Excuse the 20-year-old stories - I was quite new. And young. Follow on Twitter @XFactorErotica for updates Now out on Amazon - Cottage on the Beach: This Passionate May-December Romance Needs to be Hidden - An ...