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by CallieGrey

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Lovely story with a twist

Beautiful character build up and enough detail to paint a solid scene.

Teases the reader with a hint of sensuality to come and leaves us wondering and waiting.

Very well done Callie

Kiwi M.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
That's good writing

You packed a lot of story into a very few words. Very well done.

CallieGreyCallieGreyover 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you Anonymous Kiwi

I'm glad you liked the build up. I thought my heroine was a sexy siren, so gave her a whole unseen franchise. I thought the reader should finish the story their way, though.

CallieGreyCallieGreyover 4 years agoAuthor
Kind words Anonymous

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed my story :)

A_BierceA_Bierceover 4 years ago

Very nice

Every young reporter's fantasy.

CallieGreyCallieGreyover 4 years agoAuthor
Indeed A

You're so right :)

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Aussie author looking to try out new writing style.