All Comments on 'Chess - Opening Moves'

A good start to a story, but maybe a little short. I think this chapter (I understand that this is going to be a series) should have explained a little more. Who is Mother Freona? A priestess? And the woman Chess saved? Is she another priestess? And who and why did he hit Chess? I like the way this story is written, the reading is easy and interesting, and manages to keep the interest of the reader.

I hope the next chapter comes soon.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

Interesting but would have been good to have more explanation as to what's happening in this chapter.