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W_O_GW_O_Gover 13 years ago
Not 5 stars but 3

I mistakenly hit 5 stars when I meant to press 3 - damn handhelds! Here's why:

Great buildup. Nice, long, slow tease. Well done.

Kim didn't get off? Not cool. And if she did, you didn't make that clear.

You need an editor or a word processing program with spellcheck. I don't think you *can't* spell I just think there are a lot of typos.

Sweet BeeSweet Beeover 13 years ago
Great debut!

Can't wait for the next installment!

intrystedintrystedover 13 years agoAuthor
Chapter 2

I have added a second chapter.

traci_eliottraci_eliotover 13 years ago
I liked it!

A nice story, well-spun. Thank you, I look forward to reading more. 4*s!

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