All Comments on 'Chilly Willy Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Hope they have fast food

I think you are a tease.....and I 'm loving it !

Please don't make it a long meal, but give them a bottle of good wine, they deserve it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Tease..

and I bet you are loving it. Give us more, we need more. Skip the dinner, you have plenty of nourishment there to go on for awhile.

ladyviperladyviperover 16 years ago
ok I agree.......tease

You have to give us more on this one please. I want to hear what happens next........you teaser!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
...what?!

...this story definitely needs a continuation. it's just developing. there's so much potential. please continue it.

Firerocket67Firerocket67about 15 years ago
AGREED

I agree with everyone else!!!! YOUR TEASING!!!! Skip dinner, make a light snack, and get to the good stuff!!!!! This story is amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Why?

Did end???

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Somewhere...

Somewhere in this tale and its first chapter is a decent story struggling to get out. As it is, it's a bit too abrupt. Try working at it, see if you can expand it. It might well be worth the effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

U should make a ch. 3 cuz this mad me so horny ;)

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenover 7 years ago
Nice story

Please write more for this one!

robyn46robyn46almost 4 years ago
encore

We want more Story to good not to continue with chapter 3 and hopefully 4

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