by happyday
I think you are a tease.....and I 'm loving it !
Please don't make it a long meal, but give them a bottle of good wine, they deserve it.
and I bet you are loving it. Give us more, we need more. Skip the dinner, you have plenty of nourishment there to go on for awhile.
You have to give us more on this one please. I want to hear what happens next........you teaser!!!!!!
...this story definitely needs a continuation. it's just developing. there's so much potential. please continue it.
I agree with everyone else!!!! YOUR TEASING!!!! Skip dinner, make a light snack, and get to the good stuff!!!!! This story is amazing!
Somewhere in this tale and its first chapter is a decent story struggling to get out. As it is, it's a bit too abrupt. Try working at it, see if you can expand it. It might well be worth the effort.
We want more Story to good not to continue with chapter 3 and hopefully 4