All Comments on 'Chimera Ch. 01: The Forgotten Spaceship'

das Ganze in deutsch.

Wenn denn die Übersetzung gelungen wäre, so ist es nur anstrengend.

... its really an amazing story

I hope there will be enough phantasy for another chapter. congrats so far

Very good writing and a great story. I am so looking forward to the next part.

Overall I liked the story. A minor edit - " Instantly my hands went to draws I'd never seen before". "Draws" should be "drawers", it makes more sense.

A timeline discrepancy: Annette says ""I've been awake about five months". Later Bridge says "About six months. I was the eighth to be awakened. First was the team of five engineers. Then Annette and Angus. Then me."

Looking forward to the next installment.

It's a one hell of a story I'll be waiting wo the next part

Great writing, enticing! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Damn that's a stunning first chapter!

Nice start! Looking forward to the next installment.

I really hope you do a new xh because this was perfect!!!

Are you planning to continue this storyline? It's quite good so far.

i liked it time for more you lots time to come up with more chapters

I came for the erotica, but I stayed for the sci-fi. This was a fantastic start to what could be a very compelling science fiction novel. Please, please, please continue this story as you now have me hooked and I simply must know where this tale will go!

Since the captain and doc would be the last two to go into cryo, it should be one of them, if not both. Would love to see it finished though since there's no clues I saw as to why

Hey! WTF? Why did you abandon this story? Things were just getting interesting and you left hanging! I know you're still actively writing, so what gives?

Thank you all for your continued interests in this story.

I did work on part 2. However, I found the draft below my usual standard in quality. I also struggled to move the story further in an interesting way.

Some ideas I had for part 2 have been since recycled and used in other stories.

I will try and return to this story in the future, but have no current plans.

I am working on several pieces for this website, as well as a non-erotic story that I hope to produce and release as a full, self published novel.

Okay, I think I get it now. But still, this story has great potential. Murder mystery in space perhaps? You've built up some decent suspense so far. I'll be ready when you are.