by teachgirl1980
I really enjoyed that story, teachgirl; your name is perfect, by the way - I have so much to learn about writing and you weave your stories so well. I look forward to reading them all - and new ones!
Thank you for a most exciting tale.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. However, I did have a hard time, no pun intended, trying to place myself in Cory's place because you had written the story from a first person perspective. From the story, I have gained new insights into the female mind and I thank you for that.
Sehr gut – weiter so!
Not your typical sex story but a really well written straight forward romantic "making love" story. well done.
New visitor, but wanted to let you know this was a great piece of writing; sensous, exciting, and the sequencing produced a perfect right of passage. All us males should have been fortunate enough to live your story.
lI agree with the other comment about meeting someone like the woman in your story. I hope you have more stories!