All Comments on 'Chloe's Cherry'

More of Chole and Harry. They made me cum so hard.

looking forward to the next chapter;)

Very well written. I liked how pieces of their history came out throughout the story. Good pacing too.

That was hot I can't wait for more

That was one of the best stories I've ever read. Thanks you so much; I'd love to read more of Harry and Chloe!

Your story says this is the first time a finger other than her own has been on or in her pussy, then you talk about finger fucking her behind the bar at rehearsals. Spoiled the story for me at that point and I stopped reading.

This was a tender story, a little overblown but tender. One comment stated 'You finger fucked her behind the bar etc.' Wrong! The author wrote that he dreamed about doing that, and also sending her on-stage with his cum running down her legs.

Couldn't do that when she was still a VIRGIN!

I thought it was excellent....A little long, but it was still good!!! Maybe you should write more after she is gone??? Maybe a baby in the future and what they are going to do about it???

Normally I give a critical analysis that's pretty lengthy on every aspect of the writing... But for you, sir/madam, I'm just speechless. Excellence, or perfection, might be the closest word I could even describe the feelings I have towards your story. Complete and utter surrender; this is erotica I can only dream of.

I know it's been awhile since you wrote this story, but PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, write a Part 2...I'd love to find out what would/will happen if Chloe get's pregnant...

This story was great but I'm confused, does it not go with the other harry and Chloe stories or what???

That was just beautiful, your writing is beautiful, the plot is beautiful, you’re beautiful hehe. Bravo.

I love it!

I need more of your stories, that was so well written and so well developed

5 stars!

I WAS SENDING MY SEMEN INTO HER SO VIVIDLY!

So, so sexy. Very, very hot. I'd go for a couple of more chapters!

Beautiful story. Too bad the man's married though

I wonder if they/some/any are answered in

The Scene.

Paul in Oklahoma

WOW...... a hundred stars !!!!!!!! another chapter would be good....

Terribly writing.

Also, a centimetre is about (if not less than) the width of your pinky finger.

Your story is beautifully written. Thank you for the amazing read.

Really nice I've story.

So hot! There's nothing like being the first dick inside a pussy.