All Comments on 'Chocolate'

Nice single point of focus story. Well written as always by this author.

It was a pleasing relationship where the the Bottom wasn't so dissimilar to the Top where they both could comfortably explore how to gratify the other. This relationship looks to be a good fit.

That was a lot of caramel syrup painting. It will be no small assignment to clean it off. Work, work, work, it is never done.

Another enjoyable offering. Thank you

I thoroughly enjoyed reading a dom-sub story that makes the act enjoyable for both parties. Five stars just for that. Throw in another couple stars for the interesting 2nd person POV passages.

So while this genre isn't my usual cup of tea I had to read it because you never let your FG down. Sooo glad I did because by the end I was a melty, hot mess who needed to catch her breath! Give your muse a high five from me! Hawt, hawt, hawt! I liked the different POV switches as well...gave it some depth and emotion. Can't wait to read whatever you have in store for us next!