All Comments on 'CHOGM Pt. 02'

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bruce22bruce22about 11 years ago
Fine Story

We have dirty cops of all varieties, drug dealing, many different kinds of murders, an international mystery, and by the way a Romance. Plenty of action and interesting people!

bazreidsbazreidsalmost 10 years ago
a great maze

of an amazingly well layered story

and from past research... this seems to be loosely based in the reality of todays' complexing world of global drug trades and 'intelligence' agencies

very well written

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 9 years ago
Still good

But getting close to too convoluted to hold on to and enjoy -

The story is still building to an answer about the bombing - which is becoming a scary thought - "Would the CIA allow a total psycho to destroy a building just to let him get some late revenge on people who never directly impacted his psychotic life???"

That someone that fucking nuts exists is not in doubt, that some people who have a very twisted sense of humanity or loyalty or patriotism exist is also bot in doubt - that they pair up on official pay sheets would be pretty terrifying.

We have a long way to go if you count the remaining chapters -

rightbankrightbankover 7 years ago
Lots of balls in the air

maybe even one or two too many. But it all adds to the excitement.

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