All Comments on 'CHOGM Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice short novel

I never imagined we would have story like this here!

teedeedubteedeedubabout 11 years ago
Agreed.

Very good. The best of what you have posted to date. Please keep 'em coming.

Thanks.........

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 9 years ago
Yeah now we get a clue

She knows so many good tricks -

She has always been a bit too smart and ahead of the curve -

I thought she might be an agent but I guess not quite right - but we are not up to spoed yet are we??

rightbankrightbankover 7 years ago
It is starting to come together

I had to go back to Pt. 01 to remind myself of all the pieces. But the niggly bits have begun to gel. The time jumps (back and forth) have been cumbersome. And I hate cliff hangers. But those are all my limitations, oh well.

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I'm a pretty normal average male, chronologically well over 18 but psychologically I'm not so sure. I have been writing as a hobby for many years and now that I have time on my hands I am looking to become more professional at it. I enjoy reading, morning walks along the river...

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