All Comments on 'Choices and Sacrifices Ch. 02'

I know there are some eye discrepancies in this chapter, I'm so sorry. Keegan's eyes are grey. 😔

Great job, please give us more

Keegan is such an idiot, I want to shake him. I understand he don't want to hurt Beth's feelings but what does he think deceiving two women is going to accomplish. He is confused but he wants to show he is an adult and take on adult responsibilties then he need to start doing the right thing.

I'm really enjoying this story, and the pace you've set for Keegan and Sabrina's relationship to grow. Please update soon.

why the fuck would they stand in everyone's way just to talk in real life that annoys the hell out of me and if you ask me that shows the most character like what makes your stupid little convos and petty problems so important

Hahahahahahahahahahaahahah are you serious? I'm literally crying holy shit.

1* just for the juvenile storyline, very telling as to what sort of person the writer is.

I'm really looking forward to seeing how things work out between Keegan and Sabrina. And I really enjoy how you write.

You know the story line from reading just two chapters? That's really amazing. And then you know who I am as a person too? I'm honestly... just wow. You're awesome honey.

Can't wait to see what happens next! Keegan shouldn't lie to Bethany, he should just end things between them, but he can't :( he will regret not being honest if his lies come to light...

great story so far, add more soon:)

Please ignore those ignorant and unintelligent anonymous comments. You are a great writer and all of your stories have proven just that. I can't wait to see what's to come between these two. Keep up the GREAT work and please update soon :)

Please don't take forever. I hate waiting months for the next chapter. I like this a lot so far ....

This story is absolutely captivating please continue the story. I really liked it and you are a very good writer. Favorite author by far!.

Not your best story so far, but some of the criticism is unjustified, so....

Five.

Keegan is making a mess for himself. He could have simply told the truth about Bethany, but you know, this is what it's like in life. I mean to stay around to see how it bites him in the ass. He still has a way to go before he can consider himself a grown up.

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I like the story so far and commend your effort for trying something new. I'm still learning myself and it's hard work. People who give constructive criticism, nicely, are the biggest help, the others just ignore.

Dump her already

Uh-oh Keegan needs to end things with Beth otherwise it will ruin what's happening between him and Sabrina. Other than that, I really , really like where this is going. Keegan sounds like a sweetheart like really in tune with his emotions (damn wish I could meet a dread head guy like that lol) love Sabrina she's sweet too. Beth is a little stalkerish and Quincy is cool as Q haha. I shall be reading on :-)