All Comments on 'Choices Ch. 01'

Please keep it coming. Maybe make each chapter a little longer,please? Thanks for entertaining us.

It is well written and of course has the whole world of possibilities open. I look forward to more of the story and the background of the characters as they develop.<P>Thank you for the entertainment<P>PT

Hope that you can keep up the fine writing

and plotting through many chapters.

Thanks for writing

Sad beginning!

5

Well written and engaging story. Seemed like a strange place to end it, though. A paragraph earlier would have made more sense to me.