All Comments on 'Choices Ch. 05'

In places it made me laugh, in places it made me cry. In places it turned me on. Thank you for sharing this story.

You rushed it, way to many editing mistakes.

But I still loved it. 5*

to me,that was the perfect way to end this part of the story! and if there is more to come like you say,then i cant wait to see what happens next!

Glad to see that there was a happy ending, but really, Monica still talks to her dad, even with all that she's done. Really?

I really enjoy this story, an will be looking for more to come. Keep up the good work and wish u all the best of the luck in the furture.

Loved reading the series! Look forward to more!

Maybe when you make other stories, add them to your stories. It sorta gives a feeling that the story will never end. That's what these readers will want later in your stories, just saying.. :)

Well written with emotion to spare! A happy ending is always nice to find. Great job on the series and thanks for the range of emotion.

RS

Is this based off a true story?

Definitely make it longer, and as someone else said is this a true story?

Loved to read this series, really liked the feelings it transmitted to the reader and the hint of reality added to their situation. Hands down one of the best stories I've read,

Truley one of the best story lines here. Not being just about sex,but real emotions an life! Thank you.

Good story well written. I don't know if I dig the whole threesome though. Something with this much emotion and history in the family made it seem like it should have stayed between the siblings after Kim helped out.

Simply fantastic

I am not part of society , I believe everyone on this earth has the right to love whom ever they want even brother and sister. from what I read in this true story you figured a way around this problem. I have read alottttttttttttttttttttt of brother and sister love stories on here . I was never close to my sisters and never will be . I live alone , after getting on literotica .com I have gotten hooked like cocaine on this , reading about 2 or more like in your case lets me see and feel the love heart and soul to no end. I have read a lot true stories, a lot of them have very sad endings (just the six of us) take care your self . I am very proud of you for sharing part of your life with me. thank you

Well written. Easily lets all the emotions be felt by the reader. Its an amazing story too, had me hooked from the beginning. Perfect example of "True Love is Blind". Stories like this keep me hoping for my own True Love.

the best and the happiest ending to a story of love and growth.

Loved every part of this

thank you

Truly a very gifted writer you are but your spelling stinks ...

Enjoyed this tale of pain and of joy, thanks

IT'S ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I'VE READ ON THIS SITE! ROMANCE, DRAMA, A LITTLE HUMOR, A GREAT ENDING. I HOPE YOU CAN CONTINUE THE STORYLINE SOMETIME SOON.

This story just turned on its head and went stupid.

I was enjoying it, but it went a bit south for for reasons I gave at the end of Chapter 4

You guys have no idea what incest is, what it really means or feels like

Next story. I hope it improves this one. I always like it when the incest couple, sister or cousin get to be together.

My love was forcibly taken from me, I was too young to stop it.😔

I re-read this story to see if I still would feel the same rating would apply. It still does and I feel I will read this again next year too. Bravo to author Choices101. Forget the one or two naysayers here.

I loved the whole series and look forward to reading more of your work. keep writing. and please don't let those who cannot write, discourage you from continuing. you have talent! go for it.

not bad. just felt that the girl sex scenes were not needed and sort of forced. 2 women could love and share a man without the bisexual parts, or 2 men and 1 woman