All Comments on 'Choosing My Mate Pt. 00.1'

Too short, build up was nice then ended abruptly like to read more of this and have the sister have a change of feelings for the breeding by her brother

Oh so much more to come I hope. This could be a very hot story indeed.

More please

Great setup. Anxiously anticipating more....

Tc

Can’t wait to read more! Bro/sis incest with pregnancy? Yes please! Now I’m just hoping for at least a little Bro dom / Sis sub lol

Great start, she needs to have a mind blowing orgasm.

My guess is that they don't tell the woman that the "shot" makes it almost impossible for her not to have an orgasm.

Only gave it 3*, but it has potential, it was just to short without some needed development.

Hey guys! I'm not really sure what happened with the second half of this story. It was submitted on the same day as part one, but it still hasn't been approved for whatever reason. I had been trying to wait it out- hoping it'll get approved soon. I'm really sorry it was cut off so randomly!

I'll be removing this submission. Keep an eye out for the updated version if you liked this story.

What an interesting premise! Lord have mercy, so they mate right in front of the government official, is that right? Jeez! Even if I'm wrong, it's all right there in the Government records, not to mention they have a baby nine months down the line on the very first try.

Talk about legislating morality!

It is obvious that the twins will be attracted to each other and soon become proud parents. But then what? They are thrown together in, let's face it, an arranged marriage that beats out almost anything I've ever read about (maybe tied with some royal marriages of the past). Can their love survive that?

Delighted to follow you and see how this goes.

Good idea.

So no one is gay or lesbian in this world and are forced into a relationship they may not be interested in