All Comments on 'Choosing My Mate Pt. 00.2'

The term "baby batter" really turned me off

Well written.

And these two make up Chapter Zero? Lord have mercy. Where do you go from here? I will greatly enjoy finding out.

Big smile.

Going by this I could have fathered a few kids. I think this is a good idea. Although not in this world there are too many of us already.

Awesome. Excited for more! Just keep her only with her Brother.

Very nice. I can’t wait to see where this develops to. Keep it up!

I liked it, looking to seeing more as it is a fresh look at the genre

Good story concept, could use a little more back story and character development.

I totally agree with Ranetheking this story is hot

My only complaint is that it’s too short. It made me so wet

The concept is definitely interesting, however the execution could have been better, mainly it could be longer, with, as another commenter said, more back story and character development. Want to see more.

where is next chapter??

Good idea.

I don't understand why it was necessary to divide it into two parts.

A few lines are missing for the finale.

This is the second time I've read this ccrazy tale it never ceases to amaze me the multiplicity of tales that can be woven around the simple act of procreation , but I'm damn sure I wouldn't want no civil servant involved. Do you think he had special training to administer the injection. A very whacky tale probably written by a very whacky young woman. Gimme more. 5 stars of course.

more of this story please

no involve in dad, just brother sister

Will there be another chapter??!???

Please write a part 3

A chapter three is needed. Maybe less sex, where they have to deal with the fallout and get accustomed to the idea of becoming husband and wife. Maybe they both feel ashamed while their parents try to help them navigate their new dynamic.

Jesus Christ. Baby batter?

Legalized rape and impregnation are not erotic