All Comments on 'Chosen Mate Ch. 02'

This definitely belongs in SF/F with Fey running around.

There's a lot of coyness in this story about a LOT of possible plot threads which do their job to pique my interest.

I respect your decision to just say they're Fey, they're magic, and move on. As an SF/F fan from way back, I like the explanations, but it's your story to tell your way.

Interesting tale. Please keep at it.

"I have a confession to make also. I took you while you slept this morning." Harry tried to rise and turn, his mind and body flooded with racing thoughts and sensations, gasping...

Susan is perfect for Harry. I'm confused on Oldman. Maybe it's me, but is he a person. In all, I liked it and I am waiting to see where you take it. Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us.

glad you kept them comming. like the previous post, who/what is oldman?

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I believe oldman is the voice/entity inside of harry that he talks to or takes control when harry is either asleep or doing a lot of thinking

Exactly right, IR2R theorizes that we all have an Oldman within us. However, you will find that in later chapters... OOPS! ....almost let the cat out of the bag

I just saw Oldman as being another alien that inhabits Harry. I agree that this story should be in the SciFi section. I love it!

Five stars for this chapter as well.

-Cin

I didn't comment about the surprises... I loved it that Billy and Bob are also Fey. (Previous chapter? Whatever...) I recognised that Sandra had to have had some kind of "powers" since she had such control over them; but I just thought at the time that this was a case of some alien lifeform being superior to human minds.

I really like your story Harry. Gripping storytelling.

-Cin

Liked Ch. 1 as well and am now off to read the next installment.

Brilliant work mate!! It evokes such intense feelings within me. Keep up the great work