All Comments on 'Chosen Mate Ch. 07'

Awesome chapter. Loved it. More please. This story has captivated me and I cant wait to see where it goes. You get 5 stars.

Glad I'm coming to this late so I can get the whole tale at once.

So I've been reading this until now, waiting for the other shoe to drop and I can't keep waiting anymore. The story is confusing and everything just seems to be a "secret", nothing seems to be "revealed", it's just accepted that you know what is going on. What was the armoured vision that Harry saw? What is Oldman keeping to himself and as they seem to be sharing minds why can't Harry and Sandra sense it? What was the door inside Harry's head with the paths leading off? Who were the people floating down the river after the mating? So many other things are going on and Harry doesn't want to ask some questions or get some clarification?

But the worst thing is that nothing is really happening and it's just a little bit boring. I don't care about Sandra or Harry and I can't believe everyone's total acceptance of an alien intelligence living inside Harry's head. All those unanswered questions and I just don't really care, and that's the issue with this story.