by HarryHill
What a pair. Still arguing until the end. Harryhill I must say this journey with you has been extraordinary. I have loved every minute of it. I can't wait for the Epilogue. The people were so likable, so real. And the story was so unique. I can honestly say I've never read a story like this anywhere. Congratulations on a story well told. If you start a new tale, I will be more than happy the read the first few chapters for you. LOL. I wont leak any spoilers or nothing. Just saying. 5 stars all the way.
Your unique vision and storytelling ability have allowed us to meet and bond with the characters in your tale. With it coming to a close, it is almost bittersweet...like friends are parting ways. To me that says much about the story, it has become part of us. Thank you for sharing your vision of the Shining People with us.
Far too many holes in the story, much too much that is unexplained. The author attempts to write as though s/he is Tolkein, but alas s/he is not. There's just so much here that makes no sense. I would not recommend this.