All Comments on 'Chris and Jasper Ch. 06'

by kmillerk1

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zxcoleman about 4 years ago

Loving the story but....

this chapter felt rushed and lacking.

Anonymousabout 3 years ago

The story has a nice plot and a good set of characters, but the meddling of present and past tense, incomplete or unrefined sentences and a rather simple style of writing do spoil the fun

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I'm going to stop writing for a bit. There are several reasons for this. 1. In and out of writer's block. 2. Lit keeps returning my stories because they think that AI has written them. (So, warning, it's not just me; a lot of authors are getting flagged.) 3. I have things to ...

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