All Comments on 'Chris' Visit'

Yep they are out in force today another lazy writer and yes it’s just garbage

Maybe through this in Mature next time? I agree it has a wife screwing around but you get a better score out of LW with these type of plots.

i enjoyed this story well done going to have a look at your other posts

To what was a 25 year good marriage... too bad

Nobody to like in this shit.

Would be sickened if that was my wife.

Oh-emm-GEEE

This story was perfect. Perfect build up, Perfect set-up. Perfect - just plain perfect.

On a scale of 1-10 - this is a 12.

Will there be another part?

I particularly enjoyed the dialogue.

Keep up the amazing work!

lovely pacing, credible dialogue and (amazing for Literotica) interesting characters, at least partly fleshed out.

Do you intend to add a sequel/continuation - and if not would you be open to someone else continuing the scenario?

Talent-free drivel scribbler.

The husband is almost a weak voyeur cuckold jerking off while he watches.

amazing love your stories

Great! Loved It and I was able to imaging It was me and muy wife the whole story. Haters: really, why do you bother to read these stories if you don't like the subject? This Is exactly what we are looking for in this category. I'm sure there are more categories for you. Go read stories there and don't waste your time.

Another National Geographic tale of a mangy old cougar hunting a young buck.

To anonymous: This is a cheating wife's category, not a voyeur husband category. Anyway, I was trying to enjoy the story which in fact was very good, He brought the wife out damn good. and then the kid saying Mrs Peterson makes my wiener hard. Man that was hot, Except where the husband kept referring to himself. Those lookout places he seemed to know so well. The cookout place in the patio? His office? his wife's office? He knew which gave the best view. But since his wife hadn't been doing anything till now, how did he know where he could get a better view? Which leads me to believe that he must have been masturbating to his daughters. Wonder how the daughters would feel thinking they were having their private moments with their boyfriends, or just friends, While daddy is masturbating while spying on them.

Another cuck shit tale!! What’s with the environment?? Every man wants to be a cuck…either to a black cock or a young stud!!