by MichaelinChina
...maybe a little more detail and background so it doesn't seem like she's totally unjustified, or that she may be?
Pistolpackinpete: I believe I gave sufficient background in the 2nd and 3rd pars. I admit it was brief but I didn't want to go into a long detailed analysis of the problems with her marriage. To do so might have bored the reader.
I would hope that readers enjoyed the little moments and 'asides' throughout the story as well as the 'twist' at the end to make it a little higher up the ladder of 'stroke stories'.
And anonymous: indeed! For the same reasons many women choose to remain in dysfunctional marriages - for the house and the pool and the 'good life' which includes the possibility of a sly casual fuck.
Thanks again to you both for your comments and the opportunity to respond.
Hope ya voted lol!
Michael (inChina)
Well, well, a story so hot that it made me reach and caress my cunt deserved a 5 star. Cheers!
That was nice.
I thought there was plenty sufficient background, you even threw in a cheatee secretary to justify Christina's slutty ways! And she thought of seeing Mark again, not calling the plumber out next.