All Comments on 'Christina's Body Pt. 01'

Interesting story I’m looking forward to reading more!!!

Good story, but there were a lot of typos which were distracting. Try proof reading before posting chapter 2.

Not a bad start at all. You need to work on the dialogue some though. "Time for bed, kiddo?", to what is approximately a 25 year old? I cant imagine any parent saying that. Five stars for a first effort though.

But SHE did initiate it.

But HE is the parent.

Dilemma

That was hot, AF.

Love to see what happened next!

I wonder if that ever really happens.

I loved the story, but I wish you'd just published it complete. I'm eager for more.

Short and sweet and to the point cant wait for chapter two

I sincerely hope there is more to this story.

OMG--you have to finish this...PLEASE!

I've teased my dad Rick irl for years, hoping he would not be able to resist me. I've wanted to feel his hot cum on my legs too. I'm stacy18_bi at Hotmail. Hit me up...daddy!

Extremely well written from many different ways. For two attractive people it's very difficult not to have some type of desire. All it takes is one of them to be brave and uninhabited.