by away443
Wow. Had me from the first paragraph. Beautiful writing. Thank you.
Love the way you really explored and drew out the turmoil, hesitancy, and attraction of the proposition. The betrayal was great.
I look forward to another chapter. They work together, so it's not a one and done thing. Will Christine find herself wanting more? Will she be torn about asking Amy for it? Will Amy decide to make good on her threats? Christine staying late to do Amy's work so Amy will go be with Roy, justifying in Christine's mind what she does with Amy?
Looking forward to it.
Also, I'd love to see your writing perspective on an older woman propositioning a younger girl she knows, say a teacher to a (recently) former student. Explore the humiliation, anxiety, and arousal of putting that first step out there of explaining her kink and then making the offer of her husband. The suspense waiting days or weeks for an answer. Fearing the girl spreading rumors. Then finally getting her request granted and both loving and hating it.
Again, looking forward to more.
What if Christine comes clean with her husband. And they torture Amy for days.. leaving her a mindless wreck in the middle of the ghetto surrounded by 20 gang bangers who then use her over and over before turning her into a real worthless used whore and selling her ass on the streets. Just an idea.