All Comments on 'Christmas Angel'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

gotta love a story that hits you in the feels as well as this one does, bravo

woodwardwoodwardover 4 years ago

What a great story and told very well. Thank You.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 4 years ago

Disjointed, confusing, needs proof reading. Silly things occur that defy logic, eg daughter sees and talks to him, but she just walks away and he acts like it's no big deal that he was recognised. Surely they would have spent time together, he would want to know about himself. He wouldn't have reacted to her mention of his wife as he wouldn't know he was married.

Why bring up old work you had already uploaded that need work.

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

I like the story a lot. AAAA++++

chytownchytownover 1 year ago

*****Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

AnotherChapterAnotherChapter3 months ago

I liked the story, sort of Charles Dickens flavour to it, but there were holes that made it hard to comprehend. Why did his daughter just walk away from his obvious confusion? Why were all these people who were praying for him not acting on their concerns? What was the issue with the father / angel figure?

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Am a clerk here in Florida. I started writing almost three years ago again. I am dabbling in almost all genres. I hope I can bring a little enjoyment to those that have never read me. Also am an old Dom out of the life style for years. Am open to private chat with almost anyon...