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chytownchytownabout 3 years ago

****Fun sexy read with three sisters lucky so and so! Good read. Thanks for sharing.

nixroxnixroxover 2 years ago

3 stars - you need to slow down and drag this story out a bit more. The potential is right there, it just needs to be fleshed out. Keep writing - I liked the story.

nixroxnixroxover 2 years ago

hhhahaha - I just looked at your page and yes the story goes on and on and on - never mind what I said previously.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Great story - very erotic- what a lucky guy. Great writing / can’t wait for next chapter

wwaldripwwaldrip4 months ago

Great story, very erotic, look forward to reading more chapters

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Been suffering a bit of writer's block lately. I think I've overcome that, at least for the moment as I just submitted my third work in a little over a week. "Molly" was a story I'd been working on for over two years and the newest one "Irresistible Force" nearly as long. Sti...

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