All Comments on 'Christmas Delight'

If this was in group sex catagory, I would not have given it a shitty vote

all the best! feel sorry for the husband though... what a looser.

Charley is fabulous, you are lucky to have such a great mentor! Good luck!

what I feel about the story! I humbly thank you for the mention, yet reminder to those who would think otherwise: an editor I am not ;) Nice job Jonathan.

ARE WRITERS SO WEAK THAT THEY HAVE TO MAKE PEOPLE THINK,LET YOU FUCK MY WIFE IS OK.THAT B/S, WHEN YOU WRITERS GET SOME BALLS AND NO ISN'T OK FUCKING OTHERS WIVES.

This was a great group sex story, but loving wife.... Jess's hubby what a wimp... he could have stoped jess but let her cheat on him... know wonder he wanted to get drunk his wife turned slut

This is the kind of Xmas party I would like to attend. I don't see what a couple of the commentators were fussing about as this site is about erotic stories...not nursery rhymes. Different people respond differently to sex with others. I felt Peter had some comflict with what was going on and handled it as well as he could considering these were friends and not strangers.

I guess everyone has a different definition of what Christmas spirit is. In reading some of the comments you received, maybe some readers should try the dictionary. The word "erotic", despite what some of your readers may think , does not neccessarily include gang bangs of drunken women while wimp husbands watch. the Ct.Yankee

An erotic story should arouse the reader, and this story did that very well. I wouldn't mind going to a Christmas party like that too, but w/out the alcohol.

But a poor loving wife story. Watching your drunk wife get fucked by your friend isn't exactly all that erotic. Even when one of the other wives is trying to distract you by letting you fuck her.

Oh, and cleaning out another man's sperm at the end. Good wimpy husband ending.

That is one HOT little story!!! Your descriptions were fantastic. It was easy to follow who was doing what to who.

Just Wow!! For a first story, this is brilliant. Keep em cumming!! ;-)

Well I'm so charged up (erotically that is) could you please - pretty please - continue this story by dropping your loving wife by a whorehouse in a black section of town - seems you like to watch and suck out big dicked stringy cum from your loving wife's wet saggy cunt (damn that was erotic - it must be the Christmas Spirit).

Anyway, myself and all the other non-sick married, divorced, divorced and remarried people who respect thier spouse really really really respect you for writing this loving Christmas Theme of Cuckolding - it just makes us warm and cuddly to think that at this time of year new classic's of great eroticness are only one touch of your pen away. You should be so proud of yourself and Chas - you have probably already told the kids right - now don't forget the neighbors - man your mom god bless her soul - she's ganna be so proud - King Cuckold - well maybe not yet butt it gives you something to shoot for eh

Look all seriousness aside - are you proud of devoting a lot of time and effort to this sick theme - it appears that you and Chas may have gotten off on the wrong foot with many readers - wrong catagory & bad theme - unless you are into fetish, chaos and mayhem and it is your right to like it - did you really think about it - did you want to be appreciated - do you care about disrespecting many in this audience - although it may seem erotic to you - well maybe this what you and the mother of your children do - but somehow you seem more intelligent than sick - maybe -

You have the talent to do better - we are selfish - we want good authors to erotisise us without disrespecting us or themselves. Please think about it - Regards

This story is extremely erotic and well-written! And the author is even proficient in spelling and grammar, a rarity in Literotica stories.

The negative comments about this story illustrate the old adage that those who can, write stories, while those who can't, write negative, brainless comments about other people's stories.

Very hot and very well written, can't wait to see more of your work!

Oh and ignore the comments of the simpletons that insist on slamming stories instead of just moving on if it's not to their taste.

This site is about various experiences, not moral opinions.

First, this was a well written story. Second,both Jess and Peter got some on the side and not behind each other's back.

Third, The liquor was the agent that induced the "orgy".

I don't think this would have happened if they were sober.

I do agree that Peter licking Mark's cum out of Jess's pussy was a bit much even though we can assume Cindy got most of it earlier. That could have been left out.

Anyway keep writing and posting.

Okay, okay- I admit... maybe he picked the wrong category to put this little ditty- BUT it is an excellent story. Well written, great dialog and wonderful detail, not to mention easy to follow and VERY exciting. I thnik it's a great addition to the site, despite a bit of miscategorization but if you think about it- the wives are all very loving- just to a whole lot of people! LOL! Good job Mr. Pryce, I look forward to more stories from you.

Well written , good story , good sex who could ask for more?

Wrong cateqory and a bisexual husband that gets off seeing hard dicks fucking his wife.

Certainly the story is unrealistic. Teenagers may act like that but not at age 30. Alcohol doesn't cause people to become sex freaks. Instead they would pass out from too much alcohol.

A message for the author, pure alcohol has rating 180 degrees proof 198 degrees proof is a figment of the authors imagination.

Watching his so called friend Mark fill her pussy and the sucking it out s a that sign that cuckold wimp, as the party was organised as an orgy why didn't he fuck Jill who was offering herself.

Alcohol has a lot to answer for, with out it the orgy wouldn't have happened.

Go find your partner. You need him or her.

Your tags are pure crap. Learn what a tag is so people who don't like cuck stories can avoid you. Otherwise they'll start to read you and then stop giving you a one star rating. Better tags will result in their not reading and you will aviod their one star rating.

This reminds me of the Christmas, I woke up and found Santa buggering my little brother. Turns out his wife was a Ho Ho Ho.