All Comments on 'Christmas Fuck Party'

Crap says it all as the style and frequent use of "--" makes for difficult reading and confusion.

Don't know what the problem is: your grammar & punctuation are above average, the style is concise & clear. I'm heartily sick of wading through lines of pointless description & florid, unnecessary dialogue. Keep up the good work!

Worked for me. Wish I had a copy of that DVD.

Loved it when Tracey took five cocks - wish mine was one of them. Would love to ass fuck some Asian chick while she was taking multiple cocks in every other hole.

Thanks for the comments, guys and gals. To whoever reads this story I would be very grateful if you would comment. I look forward to constructive feedback.

Love your story .My wife came home from a Christmas party. I kissed her and knew she had been sucking dicks. She was drunk and told me she had fucked and sucked off every man at the party.. I added another lode in her hot wet pussy.....

My wife did the same thing. She told me she had fucked and sucked off ten to fourteen guys. Thy dp her. Thy all came in her cunt or mouth. She had bites on her tits. Her pussy and tits was red and sore for three days.

The description seemed like a LegalPorno scene, two girls in double penetration, even triple penetration gangbang! Hot one!

Only if the story was a little slower.

A 5 Star

Ah fuck... so hot! That got me off. Thanks for the cum!

Great story

4/5