All Comments on 'Christmas in Colorado'

I was good until the last four paragraphs.

It would trigger the reader's imagination more if you had written it so that it wasn't so final and there was a possibility of them having further adventures.

Your ending left me cold.

It feels a bit unfinished, but I like it anyway. 5* ~~ JB Edwards

5 stars!

A good story - some excellent detail. I appreciate the realization and reality of the challenge of the continuing relationship. Something a lot of other stories miss. But I also agree with the other comments tat more could be added. Perhaps after he says, "But they won't ever find out." then Becca could reply, "Then maybe we could do it again when you're ready."

" I would never leave you"

Proceeds to just do physical stuff with her and then decide to not fight to be with her more, thus doing exactly what she was worried about....

The scene was hot. It was kinda cute.

Ending was a real bummer.

great story but needs better ending