All Comments on 'Christmas Love and Sacrifice Pt. 01'

Like reading Remo Williams. Dodges bullets in part 2? Kinda fun. Like Remo Williams.

What a gut punch!

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As much as I would love to read this story I have been suckered into too many of your stories you just seem to abandon midway through them.

Very interesting. Looking forward to part 2.

Is this one of your long drawn out.

LOVE slap-hapy-papy #9

Part 2 please

Great story hope to see more soon. Almost as good as Lost Empire.

Very interesting premise for a Christmas story. Redemption is a lot morally for filling. Hope you complete idea..

As with a lot of your writing, you mix viewpoints, here you jump from 1st to 3rd and back to first in the same paragraph.

They both looked shocked to see him. He knocked another two out then snapped the bonds that held Mandy.

This is Iron First!!!!