All Comments on 'Christmas Magic Pt. 01'

This was a great stand alone, I like it when the girls are a bit more aggressive during but this was sweet~

Love this story would love it to continue

excellent story, lets see where you take this

Loved your story,it got me hard and kept me that way all the way through.I love trannies.

I was about half way through the story and was really enjoying the settings, the characters, and the interactions. I stopped to check who the writer was. phoenixcinders, I should have known. Another great story. Thanks

Loved the story!

One comical thing, it is “for all intents and purposes” not “tense and purposes”

Please continue to write more!

Beautiful. Hope it is continued soon, this is adorable!

So good nice plot and build up

Excellent build-up and an open ended storyline you could take in so many varied directions. I certainly hope you continue to write more adventures of these characters. * * * * * Rating for this chapter.

Awesome story! Really looking forward to a possible continuation.

Got me thinking though. If two dominant tops fall in love, one trying to dominate and top the other would make for a fun read.

Good storyline and development. I can easily see getting hooked on this series.

Waiting for the next one

please more

Beautiful, a lot of opportunity for more sexy and loving stuff. Hope to read more.

There's a couple of typo's do hurt immersion. And without magical lube, going to three fingers in a virgin ass that quickly would be more than uncomfortable? Not a big deal, would've loved to see slower progression (multiple sessions) though (:

Great story line. Loved all of it. So many options for adventure and sexnanigans! Series please?!

NIce story loved the magic elements. I'm not into sissification stories, but the story is so well written that It doesn't matter.

Part 2 plz. This read was amazing 😍 I can't wait to read about how he tops Jodie lol

Great story, I would love too read more

Please continue! This was amazing and I'd love to read more.

This absolutely needs more chapters, hoping for a follow up, what's here is 5 stars easy

Absolutely love this story. Maybe a bit of proof reading needed but even the few mistakes added to its charm. Loved it