All Comments on 'Christmas Past, Christmas Present Ch. 02'

Wow! I only gave a suggestion, you have taken it and run with it beautifully! Thankyou!

Good chapter!

Good story!

5

Love both chapters. But the second blew me away. Reminded of Carmen Allende's writing.

Really enjoyed this. Five Stars!

Other than a big editing mistake on page 1 confusing Angela and Paula, the rest was golden. You do a great job of putting human emotions into words. 5*

Chapter 1 was really good I thought. Then I read chapter 2. One if the best I’ve read in quite some time. Thank you.

I liked how you wove all the threads together. A lot. Very nicely done.

Awesome story. There is some confusion with Paula/Angela names that tooke awhile to figure out but your story was worth the effort, Thanks!

What a terrific and emotional story. I have to remember not to read these beautifully painted stories during allergy season because my eyes were watering.

Five stars.