by Pelaam
Why did you continually refer to them as the older man and the younger man. It sounds as if Gavin was 60 yo and Piotr 18.
What a truly remarkable story. Word for word an emotional climb to pure ecstasy. There is only one thing that would made this story any better: if I were actually living it out with the man I love. Wonderfully written and expertly full of realistic emotion and passion. Phenomenal story, I will sign up for that role any time!
Normally, at least to me, sequels rarely if ever rival the original.
This sequel breaks that mold.
Mack
I hope you keep on writing because you have a way of telling wonderful stories! I love it!
I am so glad that you wrote a second chapter. I love it! You truly are an amazing writer.
Gonna take a while 2 cool me off after that. Who cares if it is Piotr or Poitr?! It is your damn story - name whoever you want whatever you want! Cat