All Comments on 'Christmas Ripples'

A most excellent read. A little long, but still very good

Great story. But please don’t neglect Victoria and Alex I miss them so much xxx

Really enjoyed the way the secrets played out. Longish but very satisfying.

Well, the first thought I had when I saw 21 pages was "this needed to be put on a diet". Now, having read it, I happy to report the actual diet needed was smaller that I anticipated. Still, you seem to have adopted a meandering style of late that inflates the story. I enjoyed the story, and the characters, but this really needed more eyes. Knowing you, it probably went right to the wire with no time for other readers, but there were a lot of places where it needed it. I think 'mercenary position sex' was my favorite spot. So the best I can do is 4 stars, but enjoyable nonetheless.

As always I adored your story

great story! And I for one am really happy that you chose not to cut the story short but let it develop slowly and steadily. As with a lot of great story writers here you give us the story as you wrote it and therefore it has some technical mistakes that as the story grabs you and draws you in you just skip over it. Great development of the characters! I reckon you're just getting better and better, had a great avoidance of dreary Sunday weather and other worse world realities submersing myself in it. thank you

Wonderful story. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. I did wish the last chapter was bit longer as the coming out to the rest of their friend group seemed anti-climactic.

Absolutely fantastic, beautiful love story. Thank you for sharing!

Wow Nelly I enjoyed the pace of this one. Previously I felt you over described situations by being very descriptive. Felt like it was filler words. But this one flowed nicely. It didn't feel long at all. Would have like to know how the friends would have reacted to the news. Since they spread the gossip. Still a 5

What a romantic Christmas story with longtime friends becoming lovers. So many nice twists and turns. I really liked how Petra dealt with Steve and the complicated dynamics with family and friends. And of course: the toe sucking!

A lovely long and warm story. Thank you for this fine tale.

Great story. Everything flows as in real life,Paula and Steph grow with each turn in the story enjoying themselves.

The plot unfolds capriciously with the risk or getting lost. But it doesn't, obviouslythe last chapter s a long wrap up.

But Nelly I saw you confident and happy. And readers. absorb it. just read the comments.

wmell done!

Wow there was a lot in that story but.........I loved it keep it up ❤️

Wow, another winner for sure! Such a great story and so well written, it flows nicely and honestly, I love it. The characters have depth and personalities all of their own, just a great read! Thanks for sharing!

Wow! I was glued to the screen. Thank you for this lovely story.

Couldn't put it down, what a great story. This was actually a classically structured tale with three acts, and excellently written, light-hearted dialogue. Very well done! Five Stars from me!

An awesome story Nelly, I loved every bit of it.

Wow! Hard to put down. Keep them coming Nelly