All Comments on 'Christmas Round'

Too many names to remember and impossible to remember thier relationship to each other, anyway I gave up after the introductions and when somenone with a double ender was with someone else , dunno who it was , sister daughter or adopted family member , anyway dont give up your day job : ) Sorry ..

I was thoroughly confused, trying to keep track of who's who and their family connection. WAY too many names to remember without a handy reference.

I agree with other commenters. Way too many names to keep track of.

To many names. I also expect phone numbers and addresses like White Book :)

You jumped right into sex descriptions in the first paragraph. No build up. It was like sex with the Waltons. Way too many names to keep straight

WTF - who are all these people? you didn't even bother to describe who were blood relations and who were related in any other way. Just way too confusing to be an erotic story.