All Comments on 'Christmas Surprise'

Romance?

5

A very nice story line.

Nice quick read. Glad he was there to save her and her to save him.

Although too short, this is a marvelous little romance story, beautifully written, with appealing characters and a heart-warming story line. Five stars.

The fortune having so many details brought me out of it, but the rest was amazing. And boy that starting snowball fight tragedy hit true and hard, beautiful.

This might also work well in the Romance category. 5 stars, both ears, and the tail!

It was perfect, thank you!

wonderful

Nice story. Another chapter is needed.

Nice read...waaaay tooo short! A little heavy on the gypsy deux ex machina add in to resolve all the threads.... still a good read 5 stars

She needs to go to the hospital first!

Loved it. Waiting for more please!!

Liked it, but part 2 is needed. For one thing, the daughter needs to apologize, and more background on Juliana.

Or not: it's your story.

I agree on the request for a second chapter.

Wonderful Romantic Erotic story! I’m sure that there wasn’t much age difference between Juliana and the daughter which likely didn’t help with finding dad in bed and having great sex with a younger woman. Dad can back up his story by the call to OnStar. Yes, it was a sad start but the rescue and surprise twist with the fortune teller story was Great. It do deserve one or two more chapters to answer questions and if his children and grandchildren except her and him. Thank You!

Well that went from great to stupid in an instant.

Schwanze1: Er macht seinem Namen alle Ehre, verstehe ich.

So, when's part two?

What a great story, but it is not finished based on the ending and really needs a second chapter with a happily ever after ending. Since this was only posted 4 months ago maybe the author will finish the story. So far this gets my 5 star vote.

One again, 6*.

It was beyond perfect. Your ending was exactly right. No more needed here.

Tc

When's chapter two?? This at least my second reading and still no chapter two.

Wonderful story! If she stays, hopefully she'll say," Adam, my love, we are having twins,. I think you had better become my husband". "Oh I, and the babies love you more than life".

Wonderful story! If she stays, hopefully she'll say," Adam, my love, we are having twins,. I think you had better become my husband". "Oh I, and the babies love you more than life".

W O W !

Great Rescue !

This is surely a couple of steps up from, "Come to dinner this Sunday & meet My Family !

THANKS !

Well.... Improbable, mystery, silly, punchy, fun, twist ending....

It felt like an adult episode of a Twilight Zone style anthology show. I quite enjoyed it!

That should be continued.

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Que Fantastique und Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

Thank you.

Thank you, again, well written. Even my wife loved this one.