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Anonymousover 8 years ago"estranged growl"
What is an estranged growl?
"gaped at the site"
Sight, not site.
chytownover 8 years agoGood Writing****
Loose ending left us waving in the wind. Thanks for the read.
Anonymousover 8 years agoEDITORS ARE GOOD THINGS!
The obvious lack of editing was a quick turn-off. There is no excuse for the large number of obvious errors in this unfortunate effort.
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