All Comments on 'Chronicles of a BBW Hunter Ch. 01'

by TheGreatRaja

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flim62flim62over 16 years ago
well done

this story has just the right pace-- slow teasing building towards a believable climax. fishnets plus bbw make for a delicious read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Not My Usual Genre

As I said not my usual genre. Still it was well written and a a fun read. Keep up the good work.

Mike S.

vixin1027OHvixin1027OHover 16 years ago
big Brother

im so glad i read this and was able to be part of the second part. keep it up big brother

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Learn your English better!

“I came up and grinded my crotch into her ass...”

Should be “... ground my crotch...”

Not a bad story, but your English makes it hard to read. Worst case find a proof reader!

Anonymous
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