by CABONE
You killed the story as soon as they began doing anal sex.
Great story keep it up. I can't wait to hear about their further sexual exploration INCLUDING more anal play. That part did not ruin the story it opened it up to more exciting possibilities. And anyone who thinks that it ruined the story is a closed minded IDIOT.
The anal stuff seems forced. First, because it's early in their fucking. Second, the anatomical isn't quite right.
And third, I'm not into it. So take my opinion for what it's worth.
I like the way they're growing on each other. How this works out will keep me coming back.
What do you mean "anatomical isn't quite right"? Is there a part of the body growing in there that we don't know about? Are you upset that Cabone didn't call it sphincter ani externus instead of rectum? Forced, IMHO, no. Early in a relationship, maybe it depends on the person. It all comes down to trust.