All Comments on 'Chronicles of the Black Swords Ch. 04'

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Shadowreader7Shadowreader7about 10 years ago
New chapter

Nice a new chapter:) looking forward to the next one

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Third option....

Nice touch having a third option. Reminds me of the story of the lady and the tiger. Doomed man can only choose one door. One holds his bride to be, the other holds the tiger who will kill him. he can only choose one door. You allowed a thrid option in your story and I like that very much.

Sincerely, Payenbrant

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
W*** the F***

This is some serious s***

Needs an editor. Imaginative plot lines with lots of potential.

Harry: Potter better look out.

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